24 November 2021
- 08:3908:39, 24 November 2021 diff hist +280 HDPA (Greece) - 50/2021 Great summary! I added a bit of context and shortened the intro. I made sure that the name of the parties where used in a consistent manner (e.g. the Ministry; the HDPA). I changed some verbs to the past tense, as required by our Style Guide. I corrected or simplified some sentences here and there :) Thank you again! Tag: Visual edit
23 November 2021
- 08:4408:44, 23 November 2021 diff hist +36 N HDPA - 8/2021 FD moved page HDPA - 8/2021 to HDPA (Greece) - 8/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 08:4408:44, 23 November 2021 diff hist 0 m HDPA (Greece) - 8/2021 FD moved page HDPA - 8/2021 to HDPA (Greece) - 8/2021 current
- 08:4308:43, 23 November 2021 diff hist +27 N HDPA - 901 FD moved page HDPA - 901 to HDPA - 8/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 08:4308:43, 23 November 2021 diff hist 0 m HDPA (Greece) - 8/2021 FD moved page HDPA - 901 to HDPA - 8/2021
- 08:4008:40, 23 November 2021 diff hist +37 N HDPA (Greece) - 2322/14-10-2021 FD moved page HDPA (Greece) - 2322/14-10-2021 to HDPA (Greece) - 48/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 08:4008:40, 23 November 2021 diff hist 0 m HDPA (Greece) - 48/2021 FD moved page HDPA (Greece) - 2322/14-10-2021 to HDPA (Greece) - 48/2021
- 08:3408:34, 23 November 2021 diff hist +467 HDPA (Greece) - 48/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
22 November 2021
- 15:0115:01, 22 November 2021 diff hist +38 N HDPA - 13 FD moved page HDPA - 13 to HDPA (Greece) - 13-/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 14:5914:59, 22 November 2021 diff hist +37 N HDPA (Greece) - 1947/26-08-2021 FD moved page HDPA (Greece) - 1947/26-08-2021 to HDPA (Greece) - 36/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 14:5914:59, 22 November 2021 diff hist 0 m HDPA (Greece) - 36/2021 FD moved page HDPA (Greece) - 1947/26-08-2021 to HDPA (Greece) - 36/2021 current
- 14:5814:58, 22 November 2021 diff hist +37 N HDPA (Greece) - 20 FD moved page HDPA (Greece) - 20 to HDPA (Greece) - 20/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 14:5814:58, 22 November 2021 diff hist 0 m HDPA (Greece) - 20/2021 FD moved page HDPA (Greece) - 20 to HDPA (Greece) - 20/2021 current
- 14:3714:37, 22 November 2021 diff hist +22 IMY (Sweden) - DI-2019-13667 →Facts current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3614:36, 22 November 2021 diff hist +67 IMY (Sweden) - DI-2019-13667 Thank you for this great summary! I made minimal changes to the names of the parties for consistency purpose (e.g. the DPA --> IMY; the Swedishi Migration Agency --> the Agency), and I streamlined the references to the VIS database. I also moved the part in the 'comment' section to the 'facts' section as it was more factual than commentary. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2714:27, 22 November 2021 diff hist +14 IMY (Sweden) - DI-2019-13667 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:5110:51, 22 November 2021 diff hist −14 RvS (Netherlands) - 202001625/1/A3 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
17 November 2021
- 12:2012:20, 17 November 2021 diff hist 0 GHAL - 200.254.914 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 12:1312:13, 17 November 2021 diff hist +4 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 12:1112:11, 17 November 2021 diff hist +4 CNIL (France) - MEDP-2021-001 No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
- 10:5910:59, 17 November 2021 diff hist −50 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 35FR/2021 →Facts current Tag: Visual edit
- 10:5710:57, 17 November 2021 diff hist −33 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 35FR/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:5610:56, 17 November 2021 diff hist +928 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 35FR/2021 I reformatted the structure in line with the heading and sub-heading of the GDPRhub ; I simplified and corrected the language where necessary (e.g. "to issue an injunction" ; not "to deliver an order" ); I shortened the summary so that it would fit in the Newsletter ; I corrected the formatting (better not to use "underline" or "bold"); I corrected references to the GDPR (e.g. Article 5(1)(c) GDPR; not Article 5(1), c) GDPR)! Thank you! :D Tag: Visual edit
15 November 2021
- 15:1715:17, 15 November 2021 diff hist +1 CNIL (France) - MEDP-2021-001 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 15:1715:17, 15 November 2021 diff hist +327 CNIL (France) - MEDP-2021-001 Thank you! super interesting summary! I corrected the grammar and the syntax where necessary. I made sure the name of the parties were consistent (e.g. Francetest ; the CNIL ; the Commission; etc). I corrected and specified some important legal terms (for example, not "delivered a notice" but "issued an injunction"; not "disclose" but rather "publish"). Please check the "compare tool" for more details ;) Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2314:23, 15 November 2021 diff hist +90 CNIL (France) - SAN-2021-019 Very interesting case! I corrected the English (grammar/syntax/vocabulary); I replaced some terms by the correct legal terms under the English version of the GDPR (e.g. the principle of 'conservation' does not exist --> the principle of storage limitation); I harmonised the names of the parties (not employees but 'agent' ; nor the DPA but the 'CNIL' ; etc); I added the hyperlinks to the GDPR Articles (make sure to use the correct format, i.e. Article 5(1)(c) GDPR; and not 'Art. 5.1.c. GDPR) ;) current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1814:18, 15 November 2021 diff hist +70 CNIL (France) - SAN-2021-019 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1714:17, 15 November 2021 diff hist +8 CNIL (France) - SAN-2021-019 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1614:16, 15 November 2021 diff hist +664 CNIL (France) - SAN-2021-019 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0014:00, 15 November 2021 diff hist −40 CNIL (France) - SAN-2021-019 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 13:5813:58, 15 November 2021 diff hist +22 CNIL (France) - SAN-2021-019 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4813:48, 15 November 2021 diff hist +44 HDPA (Greece) - 7/2021 No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4213:42, 15 November 2021 diff hist +381 HDPA (Greece) - 7/2021 I made some grammatical and syntax changes to ensure clarity ; I added the missing hyperlinks to the articles of the GDPR (make sure to say "Article 6(4) GDPR" and not "Article 6(4) of the GDPR ;-)) ; I erased the numbering in line with our Style Guidelines (NB. normally, numbering/bullet point should only be used for example to list names of parties or specific conditions ; here however, the points made by the HDPA were on different topics, such as the qualification of parties or lawfulness) Tag: Visual edit
11 November 2021
- 14:4014:40, 11 November 2021 diff hist +249 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3014:30, 11 November 2021 diff hist 0 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2914:29, 11 November 2021 diff hist +277 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2214:22, 11 November 2021 diff hist +208 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1814:18, 11 November 2021 diff hist +5,205 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 13:3413:34, 11 November 2021 diff hist +61 N CNPD (Luxembourg) - 37FR/2021 FD moved page CNPD (Luxembourg) - 37FR/2021 to CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n°37FR/2021 current Tag: New redirect
- 13:3413:34, 11 November 2021 diff hist 0 m CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n°37FR/2021 FD moved page CNPD (Luxembourg) - 37FR/2021 to CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n°37FR/2021
- 13:2813:28, 11 November 2021 diff hist +77,051 N CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 38FR/2021 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Luxembourg |DPA-BG-Color= |DPAlogo=LogoLU.png |DPA_Abbrevation=CNPD (Luxembourg) |DPA_With_Country=CNPD (Luxembourg) |Case_Number_Name=n° 38F..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 08:0908:09, 11 November 2021 diff hist −3 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 36FR/2021 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
10 November 2021
- 10:1710:17, 10 November 2021 diff hist +16 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 36FR/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:0210:02, 10 November 2021 diff hist +10 Personvernnemnda (Norway) - 2021-13 (20/01874) →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 10:0110:01, 10 November 2021 diff hist +10 Personvernnemnda (Norway) - 2021-13 (20/01874) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 09:4409:44, 10 November 2021 diff hist +10 Personvernnemnda (Norway) - 2021-13 (20/01874) Great summary! Just simplified or corrected the language here and there. Also added references to the GDPR when missing (you referenced several articles without adding "GDPR" after them). I defined the name of the parties and harmonised them throughout the text (the Norwegian DPA --> Datatilsynet ; the company running the restaurant --> the Company). Tag: Visual edit
- 09:4209:42, 10 November 2021 diff hist +430 Personvernnemnda (Norway) - 2021-13 (20/01874) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 09:2509:25, 10 November 2021 diff hist −16 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 36FR/2021 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 09:2109:21, 10 November 2021 diff hist +72 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 36FR/2021 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 09:1809:18, 10 November 2021 diff hist +366 CNPD (Luxembourg) - Délibération n° 36FR/2021 Great case-summary! I had to shorten the small summary to comply with maximum of words. I streamlined the layout and style in accordance with our guidelines (no 'underline'; no "..."; etc; Not "Article 39.2 GDPR" but "Article 39(2) GDPR"). I added internal hyperlinks and corrected the syntax where necessary. I also changed and harmonized references to the DPA by references to the CNPD after defining it; and references to Company A to "the Company" after defining it. Tag: Visual edit
