28 September 2022
- 12:5112:51, 28 September 2022 diff hist +213 UOOU (Slovakia) - Opinion of 24 August 2021 - FATCA →Holding current Tag: Visual edit
- 12:4412:44, 28 September 2022 diff hist +284 UOOU (Slovakia) - Opinion of 24 August 2021 - FATCA No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 12:3712:37, 28 September 2022 diff hist +17,806 N UOOU (Slovakia) - Opinion of 24 August 2021 - FATCA Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Slovakia |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoSK.png |DPA_Abbrevation=UOOU |DPA_With_Country=UOOU (Slovakia) |Case_Number_Name..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 09:3409:34, 28 September 2022 diff hist +75 BlnBDI (Berlin) - 20.09.2022 →Comment Tag: Visual edit
- 09:3009:30, 28 September 2022 diff hist +74 m LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 →Comment Tag: Visual edit
- 09:2609:26, 28 September 2022 diff hist +28 BlnBDI (Berlin) - 20.09.2022 The text is clearer when assigning GDPR 'roles' to the parties and referring to them throughout the summary, such as 'the controller' or 'the complainant', in the short summary please also mention the relevant GDPR Article, I also made some changes in the structure of the facts. The holding part was very clear and well explained with good layout. Try to use active voice as much as possible instead or passive sentences and stick to using Past Simple as a tense. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:0609:06, 28 September 2022 diff hist +59 LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 Mention relevant GDPR articles in the short summary, use neutral they/them pronous when referring to parties in the proceedings (e.g. controller, processor); using past tense (Past Simple) as much as possible Tag: Visual edit
- 07:4407:44, 28 September 2022 diff hist −35 UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3807:38, 28 September 2022 diff hist +70 HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3407:34, 28 September 2022 diff hist +19 m Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-432-0063 small changes in language and phrasing Tag: Visual edit
26 September 2022
- 14:0614:06, 26 September 2022 diff hist −46 Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-432-0063 →Facts: Great summary, which clearly lays out the facts and legal reasoning of the DPA. I changed certain things in the phrasing to make it more simple to the reader. Additionally, when talking about the controller, the Style Guide recommends the use of 'they/them' instead of 'it' (https://gdprhub.eu/index.php?title=GDPRhub_style_guide#When_gender_is_unknown.2C_use_the_gender-neutral_.22they.22_as_a_singular_pronoun) Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5611:56, 26 September 2022 diff hist +2 m HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5511:55, 26 September 2022 diff hist +25,032 N HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Greece |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoGR.jpg |DPA_Abbrevation=HDPA |DPA_With_Country=HDPA (Greece) |Case_Number_Name=47/..." Tag: submission [1.0]
23 September 2022
- 10:1610:16, 23 September 2022 diff hist +1 m UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:1510:15, 23 September 2022 diff hist +48,849 N UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Poland |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoPL.png |DPA_Abbrevation=UODO |DPA_With_Country=UODO (Poland) |Case_Number_Name=DKN..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 08:2308:23, 23 September 2022 diff hist −854 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
22 September 2022
- 15:0415:04, 22 September 2022 diff hist −1,184 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 to be continued Tag: Visual edit
21 September 2022
- 15:5615:56, 21 September 2022 diff hist −8 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 15:5515:55, 21 September 2022 diff hist +4 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 15:5415:54, 21 September 2022 diff hist −126 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 15:5215:52, 21 September 2022 diff hist −3 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4915:49, 21 September 2022 diff hist −13 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4815:48, 21 September 2022 diff hist +10 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4615:46, 21 September 2022 diff hist −1,387 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3315:33, 21 September 2022 diff hist −5 m AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3215:32, 21 September 2022 diff hist −1,898 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0515:05, 21 September 2022 diff hist +201 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202202183 edited short summary for NL Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0414:04, 21 September 2022 diff hist +1 m Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-31-5542 No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
- 13:5613:56, 21 September 2022 diff hist +87 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 16-11-2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 13:3413:34, 21 September 2022 diff hist −137 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 16-11-2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 13:2713:27, 21 September 2022 diff hist −208 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (bank) Fixed legal terminology Tag: Visual edit
- 13:1813:18, 21 September 2022 diff hist +27,911 N AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104917 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Spain |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoES.jpg |DPA_Abbrevation=AEPD |DPA_With_Country=AEPD (Spain) |Case_Number_Name=PS-00..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 07:3907:39, 21 September 2022 diff hist −184 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 Main edits concerned language, formatting and layout. Content wise, it was a great and very detailed summary. Tag: Visual edit
- 07:0607:06, 21 September 2022 diff hist +119 m HDPA (Greece) - 41/2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 07:0307:03, 21 September 2022 diff hist +120 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (bank) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 06:5806:58, 21 September 2022 diff hist −318 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 16-11-2021 A great summary with very clearly laid out facts and reasoning by the DPA. The main edits concerned layout and language. Especially in the Holding, it is very helpful if there is more structure based on the arguments made by the DPA, separated into different paragraphs. Also, the shorther the sentences, the easier they are to understand for the reader. Overall, great effort. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:3406:34, 21 September 2022 diff hist +42 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (bank) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 06:3406:34, 21 September 2022 diff hist +2 m Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-31-5542 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 06:2806:28, 21 September 2022 diff hist +41 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (bank) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
20 September 2022
- 15:3615:36, 20 September 2022 diff hist −230 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (bank) It is a very thorough and well drafted summary. The facts were very much to the point and the reasoning of the DPA was clearly explained. I made some small changes in the structure and in the language. I also changed the short summary as we usually try to follow the structure of 'DPA fined/warned/reprimanded the controller for ... (here also try to mention the relevant GDPR provision)' Tag: Visual edit
- 13:1313:13, 20 September 2022 diff hist +1 m HDPA (Greece) - 41/2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 13:1213:12, 20 September 2022 diff hist 0 m HDPA (Greece) - 41/2022 hyperlink fix Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5911:59, 20 September 2022 diff hist +14,191 N HDPA (Greece) - 41/2022 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Greece |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoGR.jpg |DPA_Abbrevation=HDPA |DPA_With_Country=HDPA (Greece) |Case_Number_Name=41/..." Tag: submission [1.0]
16 September 2022
- 15:3015:30, 16 September 2022 diff hist +168 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202202183 changed the phrasing Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0415:04, 16 September 2022 diff hist +20 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202202183 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0115:01, 16 September 2022 diff hist +21,976 N AEPD (Spain) - EXP202202183 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Spain |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoES.jpg |DPA_Abbrevation=AEPD |DPA_With_Country=AEPD (Spain) |Case_Number_Name=PD-00..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 14:2714:27, 16 September 2022 diff hist +144 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (Center for Social Welfare) →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 13:1813:18, 16 September 2022 diff hist +144 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (Center for Social Welfare) →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 12:1912:19, 16 September 2022 diff hist +1 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (Center for Social Welfare) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 12:1612:16, 16 September 2022 diff hist +17,415 N AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 29-06-2022 (Center for Social Welfare) Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Croatia |DPA-BG-Color= |DPAlogo=LogoHR.png |DPA_Abbrevation=AZOP |DPA_With_Country=AZOP (Croatia) |Case_Number_Name=Decision of 29 June 2022 -..." Tag: submission [1.0]
