11 October 2022
- 09:5509:55, 11 October 2022 diff hist +139 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 17-05-2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 07:5307:53, 11 October 2022 diff hist −221 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202207270 Maintain chronological order in the facts, use the Holding section for any substantive claims, such as the fact that the DPA dismissed a complaint due to lack of evidence; good use of hyperlinks and mention of GDPR Articles. The holding section could be structured a bit more clearly (see the changes applied), otherwise well explained reasoning of the DPA. Overall, a clear and concise summary. Good job! Tag: Visual edit
10 October 2022
- 15:4215:42, 10 October 2022 diff hist +55 m AEPD (Spain) - EXP202200439 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4115:41, 10 October 2022 diff hist +767 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202200439 facts very well explained, good short summary with small edits, the holding should be more specific (I added parts regarding the fine and what the DPA established), 'Article' should be written with a capital letter (then the hyperlinks appear automatically) Tag: Visual edit
5 October 2022
- 14:4714:47, 5 October 2022 diff hist 0 m AEPD (Spain) - EXP202205791 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 09:2709:27, 5 October 2022 diff hist +34 m Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-31-5085 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 08:1008:10, 5 October 2022 diff hist +61 m AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 25-07-2022 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 08:0808:08, 5 October 2022 diff hist −360 AZOP (Croatia) - Decision 25-07-2022 Changed short summary to also mention relevant GDP provision, facts put in chronological order, more detailed explanation of the Court's legal reasoning, delete fact and parts of the holdings which are irrelevant for the GDPR part (this is what we focus on on the Hub), changed some language and grammar, shorter sentences Tag: Visual edit
4 October 2022
- 14:5114:51, 4 October 2022 diff hist +28 AEPD (Spain) - PS/00509/2021 →Facts current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4514:45, 4 October 2022 diff hist +879 AEPD (Spain) - PS/00509/2021 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 11:0411:04, 4 October 2022 diff hist +83 m AEPD (Spain) - PS/00509/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 11:0011:00, 4 October 2022 diff hist −41 m AEPD (Spain) - EXP202200399 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:0410:04, 4 October 2022 diff hist +7 m AEPD (Spain) - EXP202205791 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 10:0310:03, 4 October 2022 diff hist +12 m AEPD (Spain) - EXP202205791 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5809:58, 4 October 2022 diff hist +225 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202205791 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 09:5009:50, 4 October 2022 diff hist −172 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202205791 Changes to the short summary - please follow this format in the future, fixed the hyperlinks to GDPR Articles, consistently refer to GDPR roles, once you establish Google was a controller, continue writing 'controller' not 'Google','their' instead of 'his/her', no bullet points, organise facts chronologically + well explained reasoning of the DPA + concise and clear facts + good reference to the applicable law Tag: Visual edit
- 08:4608:46, 4 October 2022 diff hist +46 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202201987 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 08:3408:34, 4 October 2022 diff hist +21,553 N AEPD (Spain) - EXP202201987 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Spain |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoES.jpg |DPA_Abbrevation=AEPD |DPA_With_Country=AEPD (Spain) |Case_Number_Name=PD-00..." Tag: submission [1.0]
3 October 2022
- 14:2414:24, 3 October 2022 diff hist −6 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202200399 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1214:12, 3 October 2022 diff hist +189 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:4210:42, 3 October 2022 diff hist +46 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202200399 see comments on mattermost Tag: Visual edit
30 September 2022
- 15:5515:55, 30 September 2022 diff hist −168 m AEPD (Spain) - PS/00509/2021 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
28 September 2022
- 16:2816:28, 28 September 2022 diff hist +19 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202201718 When referring to fines and numbers, separate with a coma 1,500 (see Style Guide), provide hyperlinks to GDPR Articles. Try to use past tense as much as possible. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1816:18, 28 September 2022 diff hist −6 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202201718 short summary changed Tag: Visual edit
- 15:5215:52, 28 September 2022 diff hist −40 LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4315:43, 28 September 2022 diff hist +135 m LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 Changes to the comment section Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3915:39, 28 September 2022 diff hist +202 m LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2815:28, 28 September 2022 diff hist +28 BlnBDI (Berlin) - 20.09.2022 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2515:25, 28 September 2022 diff hist 0 BlnBDI (Berlin) - 20.09.2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3914:39, 28 September 2022 diff hist −41 UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3414:34, 28 September 2022 diff hist +25 m Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-432-0063 No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3214:32, 28 September 2022 diff hist +470 HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
- 12:5112:51, 28 September 2022 diff hist +213 UOOU (Slovakia) - Opinion of 24 August 2021 - FATCA →Holding current Tag: Visual edit
- 12:4412:44, 28 September 2022 diff hist +284 UOOU (Slovakia) - Opinion of 24 August 2021 - FATCA No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 12:3712:37, 28 September 2022 diff hist +17,806 N UOOU (Slovakia) - Opinion of 24 August 2021 - FATCA Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Slovakia |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoSK.png |DPA_Abbrevation=UOOU |DPA_With_Country=UOOU (Slovakia) |Case_Number_Name..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 09:3409:34, 28 September 2022 diff hist +75 BlnBDI (Berlin) - 20.09.2022 →Comment Tag: Visual edit
- 09:3009:30, 28 September 2022 diff hist +74 m LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 →Comment Tag: Visual edit
- 09:2609:26, 28 September 2022 diff hist +28 BlnBDI (Berlin) - 20.09.2022 The text is clearer when assigning GDPR 'roles' to the parties and referring to them throughout the summary, such as 'the controller' or 'the complainant', in the short summary please also mention the relevant GDPR Article, I also made some changes in the structure of the facts. The holding part was very clear and well explained with good layout. Try to use active voice as much as possible instead or passive sentences and stick to using Past Simple as a tense. Tag: Visual edit
- 09:0609:06, 28 September 2022 diff hist +59 LfDI (Baden-Württemberg) - 21/09/2022 Mention relevant GDPR articles in the short summary, use neutral they/them pronous when referring to parties in the proceedings (e.g. controller, processor); using past tense (Past Simple) as much as possible Tag: Visual edit
- 07:4407:44, 28 September 2022 diff hist −35 UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3807:38, 28 September 2022 diff hist +70 HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 →Facts Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3407:34, 28 September 2022 diff hist +19 m Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-432-0063 small changes in language and phrasing Tag: Visual edit
26 September 2022
- 14:0614:06, 26 September 2022 diff hist −46 Datatilsynet (Denmark) - 2021-432-0063 →Facts: Great summary, which clearly lays out the facts and legal reasoning of the DPA. I changed certain things in the phrasing to make it more simple to the reader. Additionally, when talking about the controller, the Style Guide recommends the use of 'they/them' instead of 'it' (https://gdprhub.eu/index.php?title=GDPRhub_style_guide#When_gender_is_unknown.2C_use_the_gender-neutral_.22they.22_as_a_singular_pronoun) Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5611:56, 26 September 2022 diff hist +2 m HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5511:55, 26 September 2022 diff hist +25,032 N HDPA (Greece) - 47/2022 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Greece |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoGR.jpg |DPA_Abbrevation=HDPA |DPA_With_Country=HDPA (Greece) |Case_Number_Name=47/..." Tag: submission [1.0]
23 September 2022
- 10:1610:16, 23 September 2022 diff hist +1 m UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 10:1510:15, 23 September 2022 diff hist +48,849 N UODO (Poland) - DKN.5131.29.2022 Created page with "{{DPAdecisionBOX |Jurisdiction=Poland |DPA-BG-Color=background-color:#ffffff; |DPAlogo=LogoPL.png |DPA_Abbrevation=UODO |DPA_With_Country=UODO (Poland) |Case_Number_Name=DKN..." Tag: submission [1.0]
- 08:2308:23, 23 September 2022 diff hist −854 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 →Holding Tag: Visual edit
22 September 2022
- 15:0415:04, 22 September 2022 diff hist −1,184 AEPD (Spain) - EXP202104460 to be continued Tag: Visual edit
